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		<title>By: Tj</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-541</link>
		<dc:creator>Tj</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Feb 2009 20:00:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My opinion about writing has changed a lot since I started writing.I started out hating it,because I wasn&#039;t any good at it.I also thought that it took too much of my time to just sit there and write.
    Then,my opinion changed to where I started to like it a little more.I started getting better and better.Then,I got in a poem book in the seventh grade.I was so excited,because I didn&#039;t think my piece was that good.I also got in the poem book in the eighth grade.After those two times being in a poem book,I started really liking poetry.
    After that,my opinion changeed again,because we have to write an essay.It wouldn&#039;t be so bad,but our teachers tell us totally oposite things.I believe my English teacher,because she can back what she says up and make it believable.My reading teacher just trys to make us do it her way,but can&#039;t back herself up very good.For example,my english teacher said,&quot; do not right a five paragraph essay.&quot;Then my reading teacher said,&quot;you should right a five paragraph essay.&quot;It doesn&#039;t matter though, I will do the best I can and see what happenes.
     That is my opinion about writing,how it changed,and why it changed.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My opinion about writing has changed a lot since I started writing.I started out hating it,because I wasn&#8217;t any good at it.I also thought that it took too much of my time to just sit there and write.<br />
    Then,my opinion changed to where I started to like it a little more.I started getting better and better.Then,I got in a poem book in the seventh grade.I was so excited,because I didn&#8217;t think my piece was that good.I also got in the poem book in the eighth grade.After those two times being in a poem book,I started really liking poetry.<br />
    After that,my opinion changeed again,because we have to write an essay.It wouldn&#8217;t be so bad,but our teachers tell us totally oposite things.I believe my English teacher,because she can back what she says up and make it believable.My reading teacher just trys to make us do it her way,but can&#8217;t back herself up very good.For example,my english teacher said,&#8221; do not right a five paragraph essay.&#8221;Then my reading teacher said,&#8221;you should right a five paragraph essay.&#8221;It doesn&#8217;t matter though, I will do the best I can and see what happenes.<br />
     That is my opinion about writing,how it changed,and why it changed.</p>
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		<title>By: Joe K.</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-523</link>
		<dc:creator>Joe K.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Dec 2008 01:35:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The Electric Shoes

The electric shoes,
so powerful and fun.
will zap you like a taser gun.

Just rub on floor,
and very charged you will be.
so touch a friend and a war there will be.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Electric Shoes</p>
<p>The electric shoes,<br />
so powerful and fun.<br />
will zap you like a taser gun.</p>
<p>Just rub on floor,<br />
and very charged you will be.<br />
so touch a friend and a war there will be.</p>
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		<title>By: Joe K.</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-522</link>
		<dc:creator>Joe K.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Dec 2008 01:31:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like pets
that are not threats,
and are nice to me.

I like pets
when I&#039;m laying down,
will lay with me.
So i want a cat,
and that is that</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like pets<br />
that are not threats,<br />
and are nice to me.</p>
<p>I like pets<br />
when I&#8217;m laying down,<br />
will lay with me.<br />
So i want a cat,<br />
and that is that</p>
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		<title>By: Katelyn Rickman</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-514</link>
		<dc:creator>Katelyn Rickman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Dec 2008 04:10:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Angels

Angles are nice and
Pretty.They make 
You feel good,they 
Are around you all
The time.
You may or may not
No that but they
Are.
I love angels 
Because they
Take care of
You and love
You.You can never
Ever have to many angels.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Angels</p>
<p>Angles are nice and<br />
Pretty.They make<br />
You feel good,they<br />
Are around you all<br />
The time.<br />
You may or may not<br />
No that but they<br />
Are.<br />
I love angels<br />
Because they<br />
Take care of<br />
You and love<br />
You.You can never<br />
Ever have to many angels.</p>
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		<title>By: Katelyn Rickman</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-513</link>
		<dc:creator>Katelyn Rickman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Dec 2008 03:56:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Monkeys

They swing vine from
Vine.They jump
Jump and want 
Stop,you better watch
Out of they&#039;ll 
Jump on you ,They
don&#039;t slow down
not even a minute so 
don&#039;t thank it a minute.
They keep swinging
Vine from vine and jumping
Jumping.Watch out
here they come!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Monkeys</p>
<p>They swing vine from<br />
Vine.They jump<br />
Jump and want<br />
Stop,you better watch<br />
Out of they&#8217;ll<br />
Jump on you ,They<br />
don&#8217;t slow down<br />
not even a minute so<br />
don&#8217;t thank it a minute.<br />
They keep swinging<br />
Vine from vine and jumping<br />
Jumping.Watch out<br />
here they come!</p>
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		<title>By: Kara G.</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-512</link>
		<dc:creator>Kara G.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Dec 2008 02:09:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>We are Dead


The wedding gown.
Everything was meant to be perfect.
You come to greet your soon to be wife.
Babe, your smile, like a dagger stabbing me in the stomach.
The same one that made ten thousand butterfles, lying dormant, flutter to life.
The ring waiting to mock me.

As guests arrive,
your smile changes to stone.
It&#039;s cold and hard.
Your glare is frightening.
Was this a dream?

Your sudden anger woke me up.
I didn&#039;t want you.
All too soon, the ring,
flung across the room.
Your tears come fast,
realizing what you&#039;ve done,
sorry.

But baby,
we are dead.
Stone, stone dead.

Nothing goes the same,
everything now changes.
I see you everywhere,
the way we were before the outbreak.
You want me back,
but we must remain dead.
Not to become a monster.

              -Kara G.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We are Dead</p>
<p>The wedding gown.<br />
Everything was meant to be perfect.<br />
You come to greet your soon to be wife.<br />
Babe, your smile, like a dagger stabbing me in the stomach.<br />
The same one that made ten thousand butterfles, lying dormant, flutter to life.<br />
The ring waiting to mock me.</p>
<p>As guests arrive,<br />
your smile changes to stone.<br />
It&#8217;s cold and hard.<br />
Your glare is frightening.<br />
Was this a dream?</p>
<p>Your sudden anger woke me up.<br />
I didn&#8217;t want you.<br />
All too soon, the ring,<br />
flung across the room.<br />
Your tears come fast,<br />
realizing what you&#8217;ve done,<br />
sorry.</p>
<p>But baby,<br />
we are dead.<br />
Stone, stone dead.</p>
<p>Nothing goes the same,<br />
everything now changes.<br />
I see you everywhere,<br />
the way we were before the outbreak.<br />
You want me back,<br />
but we must remain dead.<br />
Not to become a monster.</p>
<p>              -Kara G.</p>
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		<title>By: Danielle Rickman</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-511</link>
		<dc:creator>Danielle Rickman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Dec 2008 02:05:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Some  Girl


This girl is nice,
sweet,and kind.
She is friends with 
everyone.
She is a great person.
She will be there for you. 
When you need someone
to talk to.
She will not judge you.
She will treat you like 
a friend.
She loves everybody!!
I think,but
She does not lik what they are doing 
She can&#039;t help eveeryone 
She want to then though
She is only one person
She trys and trys
She will always do what&#039;s right 
&quot;Somegirl&quot; is my hero.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some  Girl</p>
<p>This girl is nice,<br />
sweet,and kind.<br />
She is friends with<br />
everyone.<br />
She is a great person.<br />
She will be there for you.<br />
When you need someone<br />
to talk to.<br />
She will not judge you.<br />
She will treat you like<br />
a friend.<br />
She loves everybody!!<br />
I think,but<br />
She does not lik what they are doing<br />
She can&#8217;t help eveeryone<br />
She want to then though<br />
She is only one person<br />
She trys and trys<br />
She will always do what&#8217;s right<br />
&#8220;Somegirl&#8221; is my hero.</p>
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		<title>By: Danielle Rickman</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-510</link>
		<dc:creator>Danielle Rickman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Dec 2008 01:54:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Gone
Wake up
Sunshine in my face
Warm all over
Cozy in my bed

Get out of bed 
Look outside 
Anohter world going on 

Get dressed 
Washed my face
Put contacts in 

Eat breakfast
Go to school
Just another day 
Gone by

           

                    -Danielle Rickman</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gone<br />
Wake up<br />
Sunshine in my face<br />
Warm all over<br />
Cozy in my bed</p>
<p>Get out of bed<br />
Look outside<br />
Anohter world going on </p>
<p>Get dressed<br />
Washed my face<br />
Put contacts in </p>
<p>Eat breakfast<br />
Go to school<br />
Just another day<br />
Gone by</p>
<p>                    -Danielle Rickman</p>
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		<title>By: abby</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-509</link>
		<dc:creator>abby</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Dec 2008 01:30:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>ONLY AN ETERNITY

A figure of my imagination,
yet seeming so real that i can almost live and
breathe in their world.

The reflection of the sun,
shining like a million diamonds.
So flawless.
So beautiful.
The colors changing,
subtil, yet radiant.
Entrancing gestures,
stealing hearts with a single glance.

So perfect,
persuasive, and alluring,
concetrating on what is to be,
and what was,
while debating the problem being
displayed.

An intruiging perception of
good, and evil,
of eternal damnation,
and immortality.
Clearly not that of a HUMAN mind.

An ability to love with such passion, 
that it locks one heart to another,
with a simple glance into those liquid eyes.
Boldly stating that separation will never occur.
Only an eternity awaits...
Promising something that will never be broken...

&quot;I&#039;d rather die than live without you.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>ONLY AN ETERNITY</p>
<p>A figure of my imagination,<br />
yet seeming so real that i can almost live and<br />
breathe in their world.</p>
<p>The reflection of the sun,<br />
shining like a million diamonds.<br />
So flawless.<br />
So beautiful.<br />
The colors changing,<br />
subtil, yet radiant.<br />
Entrancing gestures,<br />
stealing hearts with a single glance.</p>
<p>So perfect,<br />
persuasive, and alluring,<br />
concetrating on what is to be,<br />
and what was,<br />
while debating the problem being<br />
displayed.</p>
<p>An intruiging perception of<br />
good, and evil,<br />
of eternal damnation,<br />
and immortality.<br />
Clearly not that of a HUMAN mind.</p>
<p>An ability to love with such passion,<br />
that it locks one heart to another,<br />
with a simple glance into those liquid eyes.<br />
Boldly stating that separation will never occur.<br />
Only an eternity awaits&#8230;<br />
Promising something that will never be broken&#8230;</p>
<p>&#8220;I&#8217;d rather die than live without you.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: abby</title>
		<link>http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/11/04/its-november/comment-page-1/#comment-508</link>
		<dc:creator>abby</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Dec 2008 00:47:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>CONSUMED.

I stand here silently,
unknown by those around me,
undisturbed that joy is being drained
from my already empty soul.

Shaken by fears , doubts, torments.
Happy things erased from memory,
my blood slowing,
body processes preserving life fading,
because they&#039;ve been detected.

My first instinct is to run,
to get away,
far, far away.
but instead i linger here,
frozen in my thoughts.
Spinning, moving freely,
while at the same time at a 
standstill.

Unmistakably,
I&#039;ve been consumed.
My well being, insane,
no longer well.
Temptions arise,
the lights have all been blown out...
   
Leaving me alone, in the cold, empty spaces of my mind.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>CONSUMED.</p>
<p>I stand here silently,<br />
unknown by those around me,<br />
undisturbed that joy is being drained<br />
from my already empty soul.</p>
<p>Shaken by fears , doubts, torments.<br />
Happy things erased from memory,<br />
my blood slowing,<br />
body processes preserving life fading,<br />
because they&#8217;ve been detected.</p>
<p>My first instinct is to run,<br />
to get away,<br />
far, far away.<br />
but instead i linger here,<br />
frozen in my thoughts.<br />
Spinning, moving freely,<br />
while at the same time at a<br />
standstill.</p>
<p>Unmistakably,<br />
I&#8217;ve been consumed.<br />
My well being, insane,<br />
no longer well.<br />
Temptions arise,<br />
the lights have all been blown out&#8230;</p>
<p>Leaving me alone, in the cold, empty spaces of my mind.</p>
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