It’s November!
Tuesday November 04th 2008, 4:17 pm
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Comment byChocolate Milk
Chocolate Milk
Comment byis my favorite
kind of milk.
The taste in my mouth
is just so good.
When I see it,
I want it so bad.
Chocolate milk is
one of my favorite
drinks, chocolate mild
means the world to me.
If someone took it
away from me,
I would be mad.
America
America the beautiful,not so now with shootings in schools,killing an innocent cwowd.The democracy’s rules so vague;He did something wrong, can’t go to jail for his age.America the beautiful your not the same.running off course, bow your heads in shame.your helping other countries with all that we had, but look at us here,carrying our lives on our back.America the beautiful, look at what you’ve done;away from our founding fathers dreams we have come.We are the home of the brave;yet immagrants take over everything,we can’t pronounce their name.America the beautiful,you mean so much to me;Get on track i swear put it back to the way it used to be!!!
Comment byFairyland
Fairies were everywhere, flying, talking, singing, and dancing.
Comment by“Where am I?” I asked one of the fairies by the pond.
“In Fairyland of course,” the same fairy giggled.
“Fairyland,” I yelled. “What is Fairyland?” I asked.
“Fairyland is a land where fairies live in peace and happiness. Every fairy knows everyone. We also have dragons that live here to, but they are nice too.” the same fairy answered again.
Suddenly a very colorful fairy caught my attention. The colorful fairy was flipping and singing.
I walked over to the fairy and asked, ” What is you name.”
” Holly,” she said.
” Hi Holly,” I said. “My name is Alexis.”
“Hello, what has brought you to fairyland, a human has never visited here before.” Holly asked.
“Well I am not exactly sure, I was in reading and then I was here,” I answered.
“I hope you enjoy it here,” Holly said in a nice voice.
“Thank you,” I said to Holly.
“Your welcome,” Holly told me.
As I was walking around fairyland to explore, I bumped into a tree and the five fairies fell out.
“I’m so sorry,” I apologized.
“It’s quite alright,” one of the fairies said in an understanding woice.
I continued walking aroun Fairyland and saw this huge castle. The castle had pink flowers on bushes that surrounded the cobblestone path. The cobblestone path was leading up to a big wooden door. The castle was very big, it had almost a hundred windows that were just on the front of the castle.
I was curious so I walked up the cobblestone path to the castle. When I reached the big wooden door I knocked on the door and it made a loud thump.
In less than a minute a big fairy came to the door to the door.I was in complete and total Awe.
The big fairy that came to the door said,” How may I help you.”
The fairy had a deep voice.
“I-I was just be-being nosy,” the big fairy said.
“It’s okay, you can come in,” the fairy said in a considerate voice. This time his voice wasn’t that deep.
“Okay,” I said. This time when I talked to the I wasn’t that scared.
I walked in and there was flowers all over the walls and atleast ten doors just where I could see.
“Just one thing,what is your name,” I asked the fairy.
“Vladamire, Vladamire Clarse,” he answered back.
“May I ask your name,” Vladamire said.
“My name is Alexis,” I answered.
“Hi Alexis.” Vladamire said in a calm voice.
Vladamire asked me If I would like to walk around the house and I said yes. I continued to walk around the castle and I saw this little door. Once again I was curios so I opened the door. I was just small enough to go through it.
When I got through the door, I saw dragon, fairies, and an other weird animal that I have never seen before.The animal looked like a dragon and a fairy mixed into one. I t had the body of a dragon, head of a fairy, one wing like a dragon, and one wing like a fairy.
I heard footsteps and backed up against the wall and in walked Vladamire Clarse.
“Alexis whatever you do do not open these cages. The animals in these cages are very very dangerous, although they may look harmful.” Vladamire said. He sounded as if he were tring to hide something.
“Okay,” I said.
After Vladamire left I heard a whimpering sound. I turned around and saw a fairy lying on the bottom of one of the cages.
I asked the fairy, “What happened.”
“I came to the door of this castle and that big fairy broke my wings and then put me in here.” the fairy said.
I turned around and saw all of these dragons and fairies lying on the bottom of their cages too.
“Awe,” I said in a symphathatic voice.”I’m am going to get you all out of here.” I said again.
“Thank you.” one of hte dragons said.
I opened all of their cages and put as many as I could in my jacket as I could.
Then I looked outside of the door and when the coast was was clear I picked up all of the creatures and ran outside.
pencil
People need
pencils because without
them we can not
write with lead.
to write without a
pencil you will
need a
color pencil,marker,or even a cranyon…
you can write normal with a color pencil,marker,or a cranyon…………..=]
Comment byI’m thankful for my health …..
With bad health i coudn’t do sport
I think god for my health……=]
Comment byMy First Christmas
It is kind of hard to remember my first Christmas. It got a lot of presents from my parents and Santa. We gave my dog Molly a bone every year. I also like Christmas becuase it is Jesus’s birthday. Many people don’t believe in Santa anymore, but I still do. Back to my first Christmas, I thought it was one of my best Christmas’s ever! Christmas is a holdiay for everyone to enjoy.
Comment byMy First Fishing Trip
On my first time going fishing was ok, but I kept thinking that I would get it stuck in some one’s cheek or something. It was very boring to me and I kept on getting bite by mosquitoes. When I finally caught a fish, I was so proud except it wouldn’t come off the hook so I could release it. Now there are very little fish in the pond behind my house. My first fishing trip was fun.
Comment byMy Thanksgiving
Well my thanksgiving was very good.
Comment byI had a lot of fun with my family and friends.
We had turkey,ham,dressing,salad,potatos,green beans,and a whole lot of beans.
We all got to playfootball and we also got desert if we cleaned our plates.
I couldn’t eat a lot because I had just gotten out of the hospital maybe an our before.
Well that was how my thanksgiving went.
Secret Place
You and me.
Together forever.
Secret.
Up the stairs of the red heart.
Into the pathways.
Go down the white path.
Stop at the cruel corner.
Turn and walk down to the beating sign.
Go to the loudest sound.
Stand there and wait for me.
I will come for you.
You won’t get cold,I promise.
Together.
Arms around one another.
I’ll never let go.
Rocking the Cradle.
Comment byDitching Humanity.
Siletly…Patiently….forever.
Lullaby
I’m yours.
Your mine.
Short stuff.
I can’t sleep.
Your always on my mind.
Help!
You hear my cry.
You go to our Secret Place.
You sing my Lullaby.
You are my Lullaby.
So soft,sweet,low.
Your addictive.
Your my addiction,my prescription.
The only one for me.
So lets stay here.
In our Secret Place.
Comment byNo more sorrow.
Only forever.
Verging Insanity
My feelings
coming out
like flames
of a candle
on a windy day.
My mind
on the verge
of insanity
hoping to have a
chance at normality.
There is a small,
silent simplicity
to lonliness.
A feeling of
wanting to cry out,
“Help me!
Someone save me!”
And then, wanting
to hold on,
but let go,
all at the same time.
A jump forward
would be the same
as only a baby step
backwards.
Verging insanity,
Comment bymy feelings are flames
Lonliness is all
in one’s imagination.
There’s always
someone
there.
I love hunting.It is my favorite thing to do.I could do it all day everyday,and never get tired of it.I love to hunt all animals.I will hunt for the rest of the year.
Comment byMom’s B-day
Today is my mom’s birthday.
Comment byAlthough I really love her,
she’s getting fairly old(:
But, who’s counting all the years,
she’s done my hair,
my nails,
did my chores,
etc.
Let her get old
I will be old one day too.
She is my bestie
But she is like a scar..
SHE NEVER GOES AWAY!!
ily mamma(:
So Weird
Scrolling,
talking to herself.
Trying to find the blog.
Cicking,
Typing her name.
She spells it wrong.
Her own name!
I think she’s publishing
“Mom’s Bday.”
I am correct.
Comment byShe’s on the second line now.
Kathryn is so weird.
Hunting Duck
Hey my cousin you want go hunting duck with me yes or no. My cousin want go hunting with me. My dad want go with me too. Dad you driver truck me and my cousin want to take to dad. I can’t take to you. Ok dad sorry it ok. You want my cousin say where are they right here oh yeah let go hunting duck. My dad shoot duck they dead we go 15 duck. We are going home now because it dark.
Comment byMy dad have working night
Hey dad you have working night yes or no. Yes Ryan I have working night. Ok dad I will come home tomorrow morning at 7:30 bye dad. I got go working now at 5:30. Ok bye dad. Hey wait dad when you want go hunting deer. Maybe on Saturday Ok dad. Stop please I got go bye Ryan. Hey Mom what you want to do today. Nothing we are stay home. We can’t go some where sorry Ryan. Ok fine Mom Sorry I am sick I have to stay home.
Comment byBox
You open,
Comment byyou close,
you get taped up,
and have stuff
in you.
You get delivered
and tore up.
You will always
be helpful
for all
our needs.
Car Parts
There are alot of parts that are in cars. The most important is your engine. It gets you where you want
Comment byto go but, you can’t go anywhere unless you have tires
and an chassis. You can’t steer unless you have an steering wheel. Now you gotta have an airbag to keep you safe in crashes.
“Tweep”
The birds
Comment byin the morning.
“Tweep,”
there they go.
Waking you up,
but it is still
wonderful.
They make
your ears listen.
They will sing
thoughout the
wonderful day.
Church
Church is an good place yo go on Sundays and wednesdays.
Comment byChurch is where you go to learn about Jesus, God, And there followers. Also is where you learn about the bible and Heaven.
The Story of Me
Comment byThe story of me,
is quite long and
difficult.Nothing
interesting,just
boring and complicated.
Never met anyone famous,
never really won anything
big or special.Never
hit that homerun in my life.
My style is nothing special,it
changes from time to time.Some
days I’ll be cheery and hyper,
other days I feel like locking
myself up,and not coming
out till I’ve sorted
everything out.
My friends vary from day to day.
That’s pretty much my life….
nothing interesting,just
the story of me.
The story of me
Comment byThe story of me,
is quite long and difficult.
Nothing interesting,
just boring and complicated.
Never me anyone famous,
never won anything
big or special.Never hit
that homerun in my life.
My style is nothing special,
it changes from time to time.
Some days I’ll be cheery
and hyper,other days
I feel like locking myself
up,and not coming out till
I’ve sorted everything out.
My friends vary from day to day.
That’s pretty much my life…
nothing interesting,just the
story of me.
Random Haikus
I have a routine
I do every single day.
It can get boring.
Look at that eagle.
Flying high in the blue sky.
Never to come down.
Look!An elephant!
Comment byIt has a long trunk and tusks.
It can trample me.
No Insult Intended
My cat is so fat,
when he lays on my stomach
I get flattened out.
Shoes
Comment byShoes come in many
Different sizes and colors
Pick your favorite.
No Insult Intended
My cat is so fat,
when he lays on my stomach
I get flattened out.
Shoes
Shoes come in many
Different sizes and colors
Pick your favorite.
Zach B. (aka legoman11)
Comment byChristmas
Christmas Holiday,
time of joy and worship,
Carols here and there.
Winter
Winter keeps us calm,
Comment byHolidays all through Winter,
Winter wonderful.
You Ruined It
Before you left,
Comment byall memories were made.
Running barefoot in fields,
you held my hand all along..
Going shooting or fishing,
we had the time of our lives..
You’d tuck me in at night,
and kiss my forehead.
One certain night,
I didn’t know it’d be the last goodbye.
No more great memories
have been made..
No more excitement in my life,
thanks to you.
You’re Everything
You’re my type of rain,
Comment bymy brand of heroin.
You’re the cure
to my sickness,
and the drug
that I’ll always take.
When I’m with you,
have you noticed
that it’s hard to breathe?
You’re the one that
stands out in a crowd.
The touch of your skin
stops my heart,
and runs chills down my spines..
I never want to say
goodbye to you.
CONSUMED.
I stand here silently,
unknown by those around me,
undisturbed that joy is being drained
from my already empty soul.
Shaken by fears , doubts, torments.
Happy things erased from memory,
my blood slowing,
body processes preserving life fading,
because they’ve been detected.
My first instinct is to run,
to get away,
far, far away.
but instead i linger here,
frozen in my thoughts.
Spinning, moving freely,
while at the same time at a
standstill.
Unmistakably,
I’ve been consumed.
My well being, insane,
no longer well.
Temptions arise,
the lights have all been blown out…
Leaving me alone, in the cold, empty spaces of my mind.
Comment byONLY AN ETERNITY
A figure of my imagination,
yet seeming so real that i can almost live and
breathe in their world.
The reflection of the sun,
shining like a million diamonds.
So flawless.
So beautiful.
The colors changing,
subtil, yet radiant.
Entrancing gestures,
stealing hearts with a single glance.
So perfect,
persuasive, and alluring,
concetrating on what is to be,
and what was,
while debating the problem being
displayed.
An intruiging perception of
good, and evil,
of eternal damnation,
and immortality.
Clearly not that of a HUMAN mind.
An ability to love with such passion,
that it locks one heart to another,
with a simple glance into those liquid eyes.
Boldly stating that separation will never occur.
Only an eternity awaits…
Promising something that will never be broken…
“I’d rather die than live without you.”
Comment byGone
Wake up
Sunshine in my face
Warm all over
Cozy in my bed
Get out of bed
Look outside
Anohter world going on
Get dressed
Washed my face
Put contacts in
Eat breakfast
Go to school
Just another day
Gone by
-Danielle Rickman
Comment bySome Girl
This girl is nice,
Comment bysweet,and kind.
She is friends with
everyone.
She is a great person.
She will be there for you.
When you need someone
to talk to.
She will not judge you.
She will treat you like
a friend.
She loves everybody!!
I think,but
She does not lik what they are doing
She can’t help eveeryone
She want to then though
She is only one person
She trys and trys
She will always do what’s right
“Somegirl” is my hero.
We are Dead
The wedding gown.
Everything was meant to be perfect.
You come to greet your soon to be wife.
Babe, your smile, like a dagger stabbing me in the stomach.
The same one that made ten thousand butterfles, lying dormant, flutter to life.
The ring waiting to mock me.
As guests arrive,
your smile changes to stone.
It’s cold and hard.
Your glare is frightening.
Was this a dream?
Your sudden anger woke me up.
I didn’t want you.
All too soon, the ring,
flung across the room.
Your tears come fast,
realizing what you’ve done,
sorry.
But baby,
we are dead.
Stone, stone dead.
Nothing goes the same,
everything now changes.
I see you everywhere,
the way we were before the outbreak.
You want me back,
but we must remain dead.
Not to become a monster.
-Kara G.
Comment byMonkeys
They swing vine from
Comment byVine.They jump
Jump and want
Stop,you better watch
Out of they’ll
Jump on you ,They
don’t slow down
not even a minute so
don’t thank it a minute.
They keep swinging
Vine from vine and jumping
Jumping.Watch out
here they come!
Angels
Angles are nice and
Comment byPretty.They make
You feel good,they
Are around you all
The time.
You may or may not
No that but they
Are.
I love angels
Because they
Take care of
You and love
You.You can never
Ever have to many angels.
I like pets
that are not threats,
and are nice to me.
I like pets
Comment bywhen I’m laying down,
will lay with me.
So i want a cat,
and that is that
The Electric Shoes
The electric shoes,
so powerful and fun.
will zap you like a taser gun.
Just rub on floor,
Comment byand very charged you will be.
so touch a friend and a war there will be.
My opinion about writing has changed a lot since I started writing.I started out hating it,because I wasn’t any good at it.I also thought that it took too much of my time to just sit there and write.
Comment byThen,my opinion changed to where I started to like it a little more.I started getting better and better.Then,I got in a poem book in the seventh grade.I was so excited,because I didn’t think my piece was that good.I also got in the poem book in the eighth grade.After those two times being in a poem book,I started really liking poetry.
After that,my opinion changeed again,because we have to write an essay.It wouldn’t be so bad,but our teachers tell us totally oposite things.I believe my English teacher,because she can back what she says up and make it believable.My reading teacher just trys to make us do it her way,but can’t back herself up very good.For example,my english teacher said,” do not right a five paragraph essay.”Then my reading teacher said,”you should right a five paragraph essay.”It doesn’t matter though, I will do the best I can and see what happenes.
That is my opinion about writing,how it changed,and why it changed.
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