Comments on: Writings for October http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/ A Blog for Mrs. Hudson's Writing and English Class (and other folks too) Wed, 30 Sep 2009 21:07:23 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Faith http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-504 Faith Wed, 10 Dec 2008 00:05:28 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-504 Hurt The tear drops the pain the scars are still there. The hurt in her heart. The tears in her eyes. The scars on her body are still there. Her heart loved him no matter what he did. Her tear drops never ever ever hurt him like she thought the would. Her scars didn't matter to him what had happened the night before. The tear drops the pain the scars are still there. -Faith Hurt

The tear drops
the pain
the scars
are still there.

The hurt in
her heart.
The tears in
her eyes.
The scars on
her body
are still there.

Her heart loved him
no matter what he did.

Her tear drops never
ever ever hurt him
like she thought the would.

Her scars didn’t matter
to him what had happened
the night before.

The tear drops
the pain
the scars
are still there.

-Faith

]]> By: MaggieC. http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-501 MaggieC. Tue, 09 Dec 2008 22:54:11 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-501 The story of Me The story of me is quite long and difficult. Nothing interesting,just boring and complicated. Never met anyone famous, never really won anything big or special.Never really hit that big homerun in my life.My style is nothing special, it changes from time to time. Some days I'll be cheery and hyper,other days I feel like locking myself up,and not coming out till I've sorted everything out. My friends vary from day to day. That's pretty much my life..... nothing interesting, just the story of me. The story of Me
The story of me
is quite long
and difficult.
Nothing interesting,just
boring and complicated.
Never met anyone famous,
never really won anything
big or special.Never
really hit that big homerun
in my life.My style
is nothing special,
it changes from time to time.
Some days I’ll be cheery
and hyper,other days
I feel like locking myself
up,and not coming out till
I’ve sorted everything out.
My friends vary from day to day.
That’s pretty much my life…..
nothing interesting,
just the story of me.

]]> By: MaggieC. http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-499 MaggieC. Tue, 09 Dec 2008 22:40:40 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-499 Alone All alone in this lame world. Nothing to look forward to.Nothing much to be excited about. No one can understand, no one cares! There's nothing really to live for.... I'm just.... Alone! Alone
All alone in
this lame world.
Nothing to look
forward to.Nothing
much to be excited about.
No one can understand,
no one cares!
There’s nothing
really to live for….
I’m just….
Alone!

]]> By: doressa anderson http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-470 doressa anderson Tue, 04 Nov 2008 19:54:34 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-470 some people may vote for McCain or OBama for president but i think we should vote for none of the above . the reason why i would vote for the none of above is because i don't think that McCain or OBama have the right stuff to be president i think people should have more options than just two people which many may not like at all cause if disagree with one another we are gonna get into fights and when that happens we have some well not some wars but a lot of wars though. i thing we need more people to run and have high educations and keep voting until everyone agrees on one person. some people may vote for McCain or OBama for president but i think we should vote for none of the above . the reason why i would vote for the none of above is because i don’t think that McCain or OBama have the right stuff to be president i think people should have more options than just two people which many may not like at all cause if disagree with one another we are gonna get into fights and when that happens we have some well not some wars but a lot of wars though. i thing we need more people to run and have high educations and keep voting until everyone agrees on one person.

]]> By: kevin whitley http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-469 kevin whitley Tue, 04 Nov 2008 19:47:18 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-469 I love my family they are cool and dependentable they love me too. Without them I would not be here today or yesterday I also love my brother and sisters. They help me thought problems. I love my family
they
are cool
and dependentable
they love me too.
Without them I would not be here today or yesterday
I also love my brother and sisters.
They help me thought problems.

]]> By: kevin whitley http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-468 kevin whitley Tue, 04 Nov 2008 19:43:34 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-468 !baseball! baseball is fun!! You can hit a homerun.. or get out! !baseball!
baseball is fun!!
You can hit a homerun..
or get out!

]]> By: kevin whitley http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-467 kevin whitley Tue, 04 Nov 2008 19:39:31 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-467 I'm 12 i love skatebroad i love baseball also.I'm on the football team it's awesome.That is just a little bit of me. I’m 12 i love skatebroad i love baseball also.I’m on the football team it’s awesome.That is just a little bit of me.

]]> By: kevin whitley http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-466 kevin whitley Tue, 04 Nov 2008 19:37:12 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-466 Shoes are warm and soft they help my feet not get hurt.There are o so many kinds of shoes.My favorite are vanz,world industres,ethines(they are all skate shoes).I just love shoes. Shoes are warm and soft they help my feet not get hurt.There are o so many kinds of shoes.My favorite are vanz,world industres,ethines(they are all skate shoes).I just love shoes.

]]> By: Bailey Carroll http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-465 Bailey Carroll Tue, 04 Nov 2008 19:35:47 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-465 School School is fun. School is great. School can also be easy or hard. You have many different classes. Math,English,Reading,and more. Homework,classwork,assignments,and projects. From Pre-school to High school. From High school to College.No matter where you go,there is a type of school. Nice teachers to mean teachers. Easy teachers to hard teachers. No matter the type of teacher,your going to learn the same. Same subjects,same rules,and more. It's fun being in school. And as I have heard before,it's the time of our life. School
School is fun.
School is great.
School can also be easy or hard.
You have many different classes.
Math,English,Reading,and more.
Homework,classwork,assignments,and projects.
From Pre-school to High school.
From High school to College.No matter where you go,there is a type of school.
Nice teachers to mean teachers.
Easy teachers to hard teachers.
No matter the type of teacher,your going to learn the same.
Same subjects,same rules,and more.
It’s fun being in school.
And as I have heard before,it’s the time of our life.

]]> By: kevin whitley http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/2008/09/29/writings-for-october/comment-page-1/#comment-464 kevin whitley Tue, 04 Nov 2008 19:32:52 +0000 http://ilovegoodgrammar.edublogs.org/?p=32#comment-464 Skatebroading is fun is takes my stress away.I'm mostly a flatland skater(mostly do tricks on ground).I know over 20 tricks.I'm in a skate group called FaLlEn zTaRz(fallen stars) thereis me,brandon,zac,and ben. Now that is why I skatebroad. Skatebroading is fun is takes my stress away.I’m mostly a flatland skater(mostly do tricks on ground).I know over 20 tricks.I’m in a skate group called FaLlEn zTaRz(fallen stars) thereis me,brandon,zac,and ben. Now that is why I skatebroad.

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