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26 Responses to “November 5th-Writings for this week”

  1.   Keisha on November 5, 2007 11:13 am

    “Teacher”

    I love
    to listen to
    you teach.
    You’re the perfect
    role model
    for me.

    I want to
    grow up
    and be just
    like you.
    I want to
    teach English
    to students.

    I like the way
    you make
    things fun.
    Your class is never
    boring
    to me.

    I look up to
    you so much.
    And hope to
    someday
    be like you.

    P.S. I LOVE YOU, MRS. HUDSON!!! =]]

  2.   amber on November 5, 2007 11:21 am

    Oh milk
    I love you.

    You’re so delicious.

    Oh milk
    I think you’re awesome.

    You come from cows.Cows are cool; i like cows.

    Oh milk
    I could drink you all day.

    Oh milk,milk,milk
    I love you.

  3.   Maggie on November 5, 2007 1:00 pm

    Someday
    Will this ever end?will I ever go
    home?I’ve asked myself
    that question over and over many,many times;
    still no answer.
    I try to,but just can’t imagine a good life.
    My name is Lucy I am five,and my parents along with my brothers and sisters vanished in a hurricane.Now I’m left with the devil’s middle name!No lie!
    She kills,she lies,she cheats,she steals.
    For what?
    MONEY!
    She beats me in public,just for money,has me hurt myself so bad that
    I get sent to the hospital,
    and people feel sorry for HER!
    They pretty much give money to HER!
    I can’t keep living my life
    like this,someday
    I will ESCAPE!!!

  4.   Kerri on November 5, 2007 4:59 pm

    MOVING ON
    I’m moving on now
    withoutyou
    I’ll be much better.
    I wish I never
    would have met you.
    I’m sorry
    I have to
    move on
    goodbye

  5.   Bethany on November 5, 2007 5:01 pm

    The Forest

    The forest is dark.
    It shadows all animals.
    But is filled with life.

  6.   Texanna Edwards on November 7, 2007 10:56 am

    “The Love Story”

    Long ago in a magic world,There was only hapy dreams and happy thoughts.This was where all the good myths and legands lived.This was where ower story begains.
    One day a red moon passedd over the land.It was called the Nightmare moon,because only the worst of nightmares lived on it.The worst of them all was a big black demon stallion.His name was Dark Halloween,but Halloween for short.
    The ruler of the white moon was a beautiful white unicorn mare.Her name was Angel of Love,but Angel for short.She loved all that lived on the white moon.As a young filly,before the two moons where orn,she lived on Earth.There her and her family lived in a valley called the Valley of Unicorns.
    It was a place where all the myth and legend horses and unicorns lived.Angel had fallen in love with a black demon horse colt.It was not allowed for a light unicorn or horse and a demon horse or unicorn to be together.
    When the two moons were born,Angel had to leave and never got the name of the colt.When she became leader of the white moon she vowed to someday find him and join the two moons once more.
    Halloween had never liked the white moon.He hated the idea of love,peace,and joy,but he loved chaos,maddness,and dispair.
    He still remembered the young filly that fallowed him everywhere.He had fallen in love with her,but could never tell her.He had come to the white moon to find the young filly and make her his.
    No one ever knew what ever happened to Haloween and Angel.Some say that they found each other and joined the two moons.Others say that Haloween took over and turned the white moon black and the moon was never seen agian.

  7.   Brooke Sims on November 7, 2007 11:47 am

    “Baseball”
    I love baseball.It is so cool.Baseball is the only sport I really enjoy playing other than Softball.
    I have been playing baseball for like nine years.I started during T-ball.I was always the only girl on the team.I have also made All-Stars every year I have played.Except for last year,because I quit.The reason I quit was because they wouldn’t let me play.
    I have gotten hit with the ball so many times.I’ve been hit in just about every place you could possibly think of.I’ve been hit in the neck,under my eye,in my leg,in my face,in my back,etc.
    Once when I was at practice I was playing 2nd base,and the ball got hit out into the out field.So I went and covered,but some how I missed the ball and it hit me in my mouth.It knocked all my front teeth loose.My bottom teeth went through my bottom lip,and my top teeth went through my top lip.There was blood everywhere.
    But I’m not worried about getting hurt,because I love playing and I’m going to get a Scholarship for Softball.Because I want to play pro ball.Maybe someday i will be able to.

  8.   Zach Wignton on November 7, 2007 11:48 am

    There are many things I enjoy about life but baseball is by far my favorite.I love the sounds, the food, and excitement.Baseball is my favorite sport.
    You may recall the sounds you heard at your first game.Well, there is the speaker and the umpire.Those are just a few minor ones.The best sound you will ever hear is the fans.They cheer so hard and so loud.There are many enjoyable sounds you hear at baseball games.
    You might also recall the smells too.For instance,you arrive at the ballpark and as soon as you open the door,you smell the best thing ever.Its all the concession stands and grilling going on.So every time i get down to the field,i get real hungry.Then i get something to eat.I love the smells there.
    Those are just a few things that i love about baseball,but there are many.So next time you go to a game make sure to reconize the great things there.

  9.   keri on November 8, 2007 10:52 am

    I’m going to tell you about my opinion on schoool uniforms.Well school uniforms are not realy needed unless people don’t dress appropiatly.Most schools have uniforms because kids are showing parts of there bodies that are really not needed to see.But,sometimes uniforms are good because people are made fun of because of what they where.But, with the uniforms you can’t get made fun of because you all look the same.In my opinion I would hate to have a uniform.

  10.   Kierra Buchanan on November 9, 2007 10:43 am

    I think high school will be a cool place to be.Sometimes I think it can be a little scary because of all the things freshmen say about it.
    I think high school has too many people there,but I think most of them could be nice or probaly is .
    I remember when my mom was telling me about when she first went to high school she said that it was very scary for her and once you get used to it.then it will start getting fun.
    She said you will also have more things you can be involved in.Thats why I think high school is a cool place to be.

  11.   keri on November 9, 2007 10:46 am

    I like school because I get to see my friends,teachers,and the way we learn.
    The first reason I like school is because I get to see my friends.I live out in the country and know one lives around me so school is the only way I get to see my friends.
    The second reason I like schoolis because of my teachers.I get along with my al my teachers.It’s good to get along with your teachers,because if you get along with your teachers you have a better learning enviorment.
    The third reason I like school is the way we learn.My teachers don’t pile work on you they teach you step by step so you understand it better.We have lots of fundraisers.We have alot of fun
    Over all school is a great place.You don’t always want to go but in the future it will pay off.That’s my opinion on school.

  12.   keri on November 9, 2007 10:50 am

    I think that repotr cards are good to get.They keep you upgraded on your on how you are doing.They also tell you things like your grade average and if you are passing.I like report cards and mine are always good grades,but i think we dont get them often enough.

  13.   JUSTICE AND KIERRA on November 9, 2007 10:54 am

    HEY MRS.HUDSON. THIS IS YOUR BEST STUDENTS EVER. THIS IS YOUR PRESIDENT AND VICE-PRESIDENT OF YOUR HOMEROOM CLASS.WE JUST WANT TO SAY HEY AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.DON’T FOR GET THE PERTTY RICKY AND 50 CENT CDS.LOL.BYE SEE YOU LATER

  14.   cortneeg on November 9, 2007 4:55 pm

    ode to couches
    you are the best
    you help me stay
    comfortable
    what would i
    do without you
    i sit on you
    when i whatch tv
    without you i would have to sit on the
    floor and wacth tv
    oh, couches
    you are the best

  15.   Alyssa on November 9, 2007 4:57 pm

    Ode to Food

    Oh,food,
    you are good
    to eat.You fill
    me up when I
    am hungry.I
    like strawberrys,
    bananas,mac-n-cheese,
    and a whole lot more.
    Soup is good to eat
    when it is cold.
    Chili is good for that,too.
    Oh,food,
    you make me so happy.

  16.   jackie on November 10, 2007 8:28 pm

    CHRISTMAS
    CHRISTMAS IS BORING BECAUSE EVERY
    YEAR THE SAME THING HAPPENS.WE GET
    THE SANME THING EVERY YEAR LIKE CLOTHS,
    SHOES, AND EVERY NEW GAME THAT COME OUT
    WE GET IT.
    WE HAVE OUR CHRISTMAS DINNERS AT MY
    MOTHERS HOUSEOR ELSE AT MY AUNT HOUSE.
    WE EAT THE SAME THING LKE GREENS,HAM,
    CHICKEN SALAD,PINAPPLE CAKE,STRAWBERRY
    CAKE,FRUIT SALAD,AND SONE MORE THINGS.
    OUR FAMILY GETS INTO IT EVERY YEAR
    ONLLY BECAUSE IF SOMEBODYBRING THE SAME
    THEY THINGYOU DID THEY FIGHT ABOUT THAT
    AND OF SOMEBODYSAY THEY AREN’T GONA EAT
    SOMEBODY SAY THEY TRYING TO BE FUNNY.
    (THAT’S THE BEST PART).
    NOBODY TRIES TO CHANGE ANYTHING.
    WE PLAY THE SAME GAMES EVERY YEAR LIKE
    BINGO,CKECKERS,MONOPLY,CARDS,AND PLAY THE
    PLAY STATION ONE AND TWO OR ELSE THE
    NINTENDO SIXGTY-FOUR.
    IT NEVER SNOWS ON CHRISTMAS.IF IT SNOWS
    ITS EITHER AFTER CHRISTMAS OR ELSE AFTER
    NEW YEARS.CHRISTMAS IS THE ONLY HOLIDAY
    THATS BORING.I JUST WISH THERE WASN’T
    ANY CHRISTMAS.

  17.   jackie on November 10, 2007 8:39 pm

    HI MRS.HUDSON I LIKE THE WEBSITE.
    I JUST WANT TO LET YOU KNOW TO
    KEEP UP THE GOOD WROK.

  18.   jackie on November 10, 2007 8:50 pm

    BASKETBALL
    BASKETBALL IS MY FAVORITE SPORT.I
    STARED PLAYING BASKETBALL IN THE FIFTH
    GRADE UP TO THE SEVENTH GRADE.BASKETBALL
    HAS BEEN MY FAVORITE SPORT EVERY SINCE
    DAY ONE AND WILL ALWAYS.

  19.   taylormc on November 13, 2007 4:43 pm

    Oh,Cardinals,
    How good you are.
    you hit home runs,
    and get base hits,
    and play the field good.
    Ilike the way
    you play the
    sport baseball,
    because you teach

  20.   Ashley on November 13, 2007 4:55 pm

    Great Friends

    Friends, friends
    that are so good
    to you and take
    up for you. Friends
    are excellent in
    many ways. They
    can help you out
    in different ways,
    too. You can have
    as many friends
    as you want or
    need, just
    remember they
    can leave.

  21.   Autumn Dawn Greene on November 13, 2007 8:03 pm

    I Fall

    When you break my heart,
    I’m a bird with a broken wing.
    When you make me cry,
    I’m a hole in my own heart.
    When you say you don’t love me,
    I melt like snow
    when it hits the ground.
    When you act like I’m nothing,
    my kneew hit the floor.
    Don’t treat me like this.
    but when you
    tell me it’s over
    everything in me breaks,
    the tears race down my cheeks,
    the ocean stops,
    the wind calms,
    and…..
    I fall.

  22.   Autumn Dawn Greene on November 13, 2007 8:08 pm

    Boredness

    tick tock,
    nothin to do,
    sittin here
    starin into space.
    When will the electricity
    come back on?
    That durn storm.
    I wish I knew
    where my candle was,
    but naw I can’t see.
    Waiting….
    I can hear my own echo…
    Now THAT’S what I call boredness.

  23.   Keisha on November 19, 2007 7:34 pm

    “I Miss You, Daddy”
    Lauren woke up one morning and went down to her parent’s room, but no one was there. She went to the kitchen. She saw her mother sitting at te table with her head down, and a cup of coffee in her hands. Lauren went up to her.
    “Where’s daddy?” Lauren asked. Her mother looked up with tears in her eyes.
    “Mommy, what’s wrong?” asked Lauren. With a low and somber voice, her mother answered, “He’s gone.”
    “Gone where?” Lauren asked again.
    “Sit down, sweetheart,” her mother said. “We need to talk.”
    “Honey, your father was sent to Iraq earlier this morning,” her mother confessed.
    Lauren suddenly felt herself begin to cry. She thought to herself, “Why my dad? Why did he have to go? He could get hurt!” She and her mother continued to talk about the situation.
    Later that day, the phone rang. It was Lauren’s father. He told her that he was very sorry for leaving at such short notice. “It’s okay. I miss you, daddy.” said Lauren.
    “I miss you, too, baby. I have to go now. I love you,” her dad said.
    “I love you, too, daddy,” replied Lauren.
    Weeks went by and Lauren continued to get phone calls from her father. They also began sending messages and pictures through e-mail. They kept in contact with eachother every day. Until, one day, something went terribly wrong.
    Lauren was waiting all day for her father to call or e-mail her, but she didn’t hear from him.
    After a while, the phone rang. Lauren ran to pick it up, thinking it was her father. It wasn’t.
    “Hello, young lady. May I speak with your mother, please?” said the voice over the phone.
    “Just a moment, please,” Lauren replied. She went to get her mother.
    “Hello?” her mother said.
    “Hello, ma’am. I’m from the National Guard Armory. I am calling to inform you of some terrible news. I’m sorry to say this, but your husband was killed on the battlefield earlier today.”
    Lauren’s mother was speechless. “Thank you for calling,” her mother said.
    “You’re welcome, ma’am,” replied the voice, “I’m terribly sorry.” Her mother hung up the phone.
    “Who was it, mommy?” Lauren asked.
    Lauren’s mother looked at her with tears in her eyes. “Honey, your father has been killed at war,” her mother replied.
    Lauren ran to her room in tears.
    Lauren stayed in her room the rest of the night. She didn’t even come down for supper.
    That night, before she went to sleep, Lauren kneeled beside her bed to pray.
    “Daddy, I know you’re up there in heaven with God, but why did you have to leave without saying good-bye? I know it’s not your fault. I don’t blame you. Well, I have to go to bed now. I miss you, daddy.”

  24.   courtney on December 14, 2007 1:43 pm

    hey good writings The bell just rang have a nice day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  25.   Cara Beth holt on February 7, 2008 7:30 pm

    Ode to Basketball

    Oh,Basketball,
    I love you!
    I love the sound
    you make when I
    dribble you!I hate
    when you bounce off
    of someones foot and go
    out of bounce.Basketball
    you will always be my sport!
    Oh, Basketball
    I love you!

  26.   Cara Beth holt on February 7, 2008 7:37 pm

    Ode to Basketball

    Oh,Basketball
    I love you!
    I love the way you look
    and feel.You will always
    be with me when I am bored!!!
    Oh,basketball,
    I love you!

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